Sound Quality
Ok, good guitar playing. Notes are perfect and the timing is precise but the sound quality is terrible. I'm not trying to bashing your music skils or anything but honestly, the video is fail, not the cover. You can always make another one and get the sound quality better. Try moving the guitars away from the amp and mic farther, and turn them up. If you have a digital camera or recorder this will work fine but by no means NEVER use a cell phone or Ipod. They will have ok sound, but when you upload it it will sound terrible. I say stick with recording in a larger room next time aswell.
I hope this helps you guys out some. I do plan on seeing more of your stuff in the future! :D